Can you help me with my very simple homework?

if your natal language is the english, these are easy for you



only have to ckeck my description quickly, i searching errors because my teacher is very demanding



My Description



I describe myself as a happy, funny and pacific person, but I am a bit too impatient. I don鈥檛 like fights or lengthy discussions.

My abilities are: capacity of observation, manual dexterity and musical abilities.

My skills are: knowledge about computation, creative thinking, the self-esteem and teamwork.

My hobbies are riding my bike, playing video games, listening to music such as hard rock or heavy metal.

I enjoy drawing, learning about new places and meeting new people.

I was influenced by my fathers, the T.V. and my country's culture.

My favorite food is the Italian food, but I like Mexican food too. My favorite dessert is ice cream and rice pudding.

Physically I`m a bit swarthy. My eyes are brown and my hair is short and its color is a bit chestnut, and a bit black. I am average height.

Finally my favorite movies are the Rocky and Rambo saga, the three movies of back to the future, Iron Man 1 and 2, and the Spiderman trilogy.





thanks beforehandCan you help me with my very simple homework?
it is goooooood.

when you said my favourite food is the italian food. you should just say my favorite is italian food.

answer my question about english assignment :$Can you help me with my very simple homework?
I describe myself as a happy, funny, and pacific person,....

My abilities are: capacity of oberservation, manual dexterity, and musical abilities.

My skills are: knowledge about compuation, creative thinking, self-esteem, and teamwork.

My hobbies are riding my bike, playing video games, and listening to music such as hard rock and heavy metal.

I enjoy drawing, learning about new places, and meeting new people.

I was influenced by my fathers, the T.V., and my country's culture.

My favorite food is Italian food, but I like Mexican food too.



Mainly just watch for commasCan you help me with my very simple homework?
I describe myself as a happy, funny and specific person, but I am a bit too impatient. I don鈥檛 like fights or lengthy discussions.

My abilities are: capacity of observation, manual dexterity and musical abilities.

My skills are: knowledge about computation, creative thinking, the self-esteem and teamwork.

My hobbies are riding bikes, playing video games, listening to music, such as hard rock or heavy metal.

I enjoy drawing, learning about new places and meeting new people.

I was influenced by my fathers, the television and my country's culture.

My favorite food is Italian food, but I like Mexican food too. My favorite dessert is ice cream and rice pudding.

Physically I`m a bit swarthy. My eyes are brown and my hair is short and its color is a bit chestnut, and a bit black. I am of average height.

Finally, my favorite movies are the Rocky and Rambo saga, the three movies of back to the future, Iron Man 1 and 2, and the Spiderman trilogy.
After dexterity needs a comma. After self-esteem needs a comma. After places needs a comma. After finally needs a comma. That's all the errors I see.

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